when you call me pet
or you tell me i am yours
my whole world glistens
http://dailypost.wordpress.com/dp_prompt/pick-me-up/
~This is the prompt today, whether it fits the technical definition of haiku or not, this is my version of the haiku style we were taught in school~ and the prompt is: What is the one word or phrase that immediately cheers you up when you hear it?
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F haiku! 🙂 This is a nice senryu, and sexy too.
Thank you Pete! I don’t know the proper terms for different kinds of haiku/senryu (yay! I learned something new!) but I was aiming for the sexy so mission accomplished 😀
Oh yes! 🙂
Beautifully sexy. The imagery was mouth-watering. Keep it up!
in two notes
the cuckoo sings her life
my deadline passes
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